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All is beautiful on this Christmas Eve night in my neighborhood Bright colored lights are flickering on many a lovely home Charming and enchanting- it seems a fairyland to me Delicate, fragile snowflakes are falling as I hesitate here and there Engrossed in the beauty, the snow caresses my hair from above Feeling a glow growing within me, I ponder the meaning of Christmas Good thoughts are flowing within and I imagine a baby born, a saviour Heavenly visions of sweet Jesus in a stable lit by a guiding star Inner peace, I embrace as I walk the quiet snowy streets Joy and happiness beyond the doors of these dwellings I pass by, and Kindness abounds at this time of year, I wish that could last all year Love is what I remember at Christmastime . . . Magically, the memories come drifting and I find myself weeping Nirvana is where my family dwells, waiting for me to come one day Open-hearted, I share my sorrow, it drips from my pen Peaceful, oh so peaceful is my wintery world this December night Quietness so deep, I can hear the snow falling on the bare tree branches Respect, I have for nature that can change from beautiful to dangerous Serene lovely scenes quickly become places forbidden Tranquil snow has turned into a blizzard with wild wind Utterly amazed I stand in the storm swirling wondering which way to go Vibrant the lights that still glow on the snow draped dwellings Wonderful they seem to be guiding my way home Xerox copies of Christmas songs twirl past and I try to grasp them Yes, there is my home, all lit up and welcoming me back Zestfully I run up the path to my door, thankful for the fireplace within _______________________ December 24, 2015 Abecedarian For the contest , Christmas Abecedarian, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton First Place

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Date: 2/3/2016 11:36:00 PM
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:50:00 PM
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Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 8:21:00 AM
Linda you are so welcome and thanks again. .
Date: 1/31/2016 11:00:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2016 1:39:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the wonderful ~
Date: 1/26/2016 8:59:00 AM
Well done well written x great poem x
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Constance La France
Date: 1/26/2016 4:08:00 PM
Wendy, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 1/24/2016 3:50:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your Christmas Abecedarian win. **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/24/2016 10:33:00 AM
Absolutely stunning and so beautiful, BW. What beautiful imagery you presented using this difficult Abecedarian form. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2016 5:08:00 PM
Sandra, oh thanks for that lovely comment and for the congratulations and hugs !
Date: 1/24/2016 8:51:00 AM
congratulations Connie on a poem that fully meets my brief and is so charming I was blown away by the wonder of your words a well deserved 1st place hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2016 5:10:00 PM
Shadow, thanks for a great contest, so inspiring, and for my awesome placement, I am thrilled and honored. I actually went for a walk in the snow, looking at the lights on houses, and the snow falling and thinking about what to write, so I was literally living the poem ~
Date: 1/24/2016 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2016 5:10:00 PM
Susan thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 1/24/2016 6:10:00 AM
No wonder you gained a top spot Broken Wings it is wonderful to read this again... many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2016 5:16:00 PM
You did an amazing job here:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2016 5:11:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, and the hugs !
Date: 12/29/2015 10:46:00 AM
So well done, BW, that I didn't realize it was an Abecedarian until I reached the line starting with X. Beautiful poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 8:20:00 PM
Jame, thanks for the visit, the comment and the beautiful ~
Date: 12/27/2015 6:36:00 AM
Warm and lovely , merry Christmas for you and happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:24:00 PM
Dalia, thanks for the nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/25/2015 4:07:00 PM
Broken, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 5:05:00 PM
Skat thanks for visiting and Merry Christmas to you also
Date: 12/25/2015 6:44:00 AM
Your SKILL level is of the Hook. You have a way to just put my mind where it needs to be. (wish I could do that with my mind) tks
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 7:08:00 AM
Mack, thank you for visiting and for that great comment, I seem to have the ability to live in my dreams and then write them ~
Date: 12/25/2015 12:45:00 AM
A lovely poem My dear! Lovely and warm felt. Beautiful, you have yet to fail me with your way with words. Love, The Blue Poet xoxo
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 7:09:00 AM
Chris, thanks for visiting my poem, and oh, three words I adore, lovely, beautiful and love ~
Date: 12/24/2015 5:56:00 PM
Wow, great! I haven't had the energy to try this one. Merry Xmas...! BG
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 7:10:00 AM
Barbara, thanks so much for visiting, and for the wow and great, so appreciated ~
Date: 12/24/2015 4:27:00 PM
A beauty of a Christmas Abecadarian - good luck in the contest this is quite a challenging form and you have done it so well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2015 4:40:00 PM
Jan. Thanks for visiting with that nice comment, oh I love the word beauty ...

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