Christmas

Softest pack for swaddling, Mary's blood rich swollen womb cradles Christ, embryo wrapped grace of God. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, December 19, 2015

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2015 3:45:00 PM

Love this unique take, Faye; truly leaves an impact on the reader (and on the judge)! ~ Congratulations on this high flying win. ~ All the best for Christmas and the New Year. Blessings. // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations. Truly 16 words of impact ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2015 1:31:00 PM

Powerful, reverent, and beautiful, Faye. Congratulations! Janice

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/20/2015 1:27:00 PM

Just amazing where you took this, Faye. Great impact indeed! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 10:54:00 AM

Faye, a wonderful win. SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/20/2015 5:41:00 AM

what a unique way of handling the theme, faye... big congrats and thanks for being part of my contest!..huggs

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/19/2015 6:36:00 PM

such power with so few words....misunderstood only by those who are disturbed....because how could anyone not deny the truth....Just Call His Name If You Ever Need Proof....;)