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Christened By a Summer Rain

I spread my blanket under the trees And marvel at the fickle breeze It takes a turn, from warm to cool To soothe my brow, as I lie down I nap among the shady groves Awakened by the scent of rain One little drop, then down it pours And like a child who plays outdoors I'm christened now in nature's eyes And laugh at summer's sweet surprise ________________________________ For Francine: 5/28/13

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/31/2013 10:03:00 PM

I find myself living your poems with ease too. Such a pleasant time here that unfolds at nature's pace. I wouldn't mind being there! In other words, I like your poem!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/31/2013 2:34:00 PM

a sense of fun running through it makes it a great write Shadow/Linda

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/30/2013 5:27:00 PM

A beautiful and sweet write....I can picture the lovely scene, I love it! Big congrats! Hugs

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/30/2013 4:13:00 PM

Carrie you made your poem come to life and you pulled me into to your beautiful and carefree scene. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/30/2013 2:51:00 PM

This is a lovely little piece..lighthearted. Congrats on your big win. BG

Joseph May

Date: 5/30/2013 11:37:00 AM

glad to be sharing the top spot with you also .... with this gem of sweet surprise......congrats

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/30/2013 11:25:00 AM

(Sigh) Well Carrie, here you go again! I just don't know what to say anymore...Oh yeah, I got something... Congratulations! (I made that up myself I swear to god I did)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2013 10:02:00 AM

I can be so in the moment you describe here right now-- we could use a bit of rain in this hot weather. I really enjoyed this, how you wrote this in a descriptive and lighthearted way-- what a beautiful moment that would be! Thank you so much for passing by my poems, such a delight to see you-- & leaving me such heartwarming comments-you are so sweet and in answer to you question: Yes!! I am nuts! Totally. I was smiling as I read what you wrote, thank you very much. Sending you warm hugs!