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That cacophony of little, irritating noises inside me Finally, tell me how we would pray for forgiveness. The reckless condonation of a wickedness spree. That cacophony of little, irritating noises inside me We have no reason to suppose we possess an alibi. Lamentation amid spasms of crying and weirdness. That cacophony of little, irritating noises inside me Finally, tell me how we would pray for forgiveness. The reckless condonation of a wickedness spree. That cacophony of little, irritating noises inside me We have no reason to suppose we possess an alibi. Lamentation amid spasms of crying and weirdness. Finally, tell me how we would pray for forgiveness. Insanely brave devotion that is never oddness.
Written May 08, 2021 WRITE A "TRIONET" FOR ME Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 6/10/2021 9:53:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, What a good entry for the contest theme. In my opinion, forgiveness is more of a personal thing; holding unforgiveness in your heart is like cancer to the soul. I wish you all the best in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:31:00 AM
The moment we become aware of the cacophony inside us we have taken the first step towards redemption, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Wonderful introspective writing! Blessings!
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Date: 6/9/2021 2:21:00 AM
God will forgive everything if we repent sincerely.
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Date: 6/9/2021 3:26:00 AM
That’s true Victor l, being sincere is must to get the forgiveness reward, blessings and regards
Date: 6/8/2021 1:31:00 PM
Lovely chorus from within, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/8/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Vijay, I’m so delighted you like it. Have a blessed evening.
Date: 6/8/2021 11:58:00 AM
Another beautiful poem from you. 'Insanely Brave' Enjoyed Reading.
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Date: 6/8/2021 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Alex, I'm glad that you like it. have a nice day, my friend

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