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Chorlton Green (2004)

Today I woke up fearful. Those tiny slithers of happiness Had failed to fill the space where laughter once had reined. Grabbing my bag, still dressed for sleep I took a walk down Chorlton green. Spying on some inspiration some time to look behind like rocks and bugs. But all I found were seasons passing turning with children and their promises ladies and their smiles faces I don't remember too well. An overwhelming sense of tomorrow made yesterday feel so long ago. A smile slowly burnt its way across my face Rejoicing the mourning of yet another day done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 10:39:00 PM
hahahahha, lol!!! I think I do ya know, I've sunk many pints in Chorlton that bar names are sometimes a blur! ;-P
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Date: 6/4/2009 3:10:00 AM
If it is the Chorlton Green i know, you should have just gone in The Jockey for a pint. If it is not then you will have no idea what i am talking about and i am sorry
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Date: 5/27/2009 10:27:00 AM
okies..this needs some expansion...no real idea what your message is or intent..if I had to guess I'd say ..the meaningless passage of time..if so..plump it up...HUGS & title title title Light & Love
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