Rowena Velasco Poet Rhyme

chords whisper-TSF

Two Seven Four Poetry
Contest  //Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Contest Judged:  9/13/2025 7:18:00 AM
( 2nd Place )

Written: August 23, 2025


strings hum
fingers drum
notes soar
echo roar
heart beats
soul meets
night sings

wood sings
tone rings
air bends
sound sends
fire glows
warm flows
life swings

chords leap
dreams seep
eyes close
spirit knows
hands play
tunes stay
time drifts

music flies
stars rise
strings dance
hearts glance
joy swells
song tells
world wakes

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Charles Messina September 14, 2025 at 4:15 AM Very nicely done, Rowena. The last words of the third and fourth stanzas didn't rhyme for if they did you would have placed higher...Oops sorry! Anyway, thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations on your winning placement! Charlie :) Rowena Velasco September 14, 2025 at 4:19 AM Thank you so much, Charlie! I truly appreciate your thoughtful feedback and your kind words. It was an honor to join your contest, and I’m grateful for the placement. Looking forward to joining more of your challenges!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh August 24, 2025 at 8:55 PM Superb Enjoyed reading the poem Rowena Velasco August 25, 2025 at 2:20 AM Thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed it.

Paige Hind August 24, 2025 at 8:20 PM Very deep and rhyme flow, perfect - :) Rowena Velasco August 25, 2025 at 2:19 AM Thanks so much! Really glad you felt the depth and flow.

Bill Baker August 24, 2025 at 6:49 PM I like the rhythm to your footles, Rowena. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill Rowena Velasco August 25, 2025 at 2:18 AM Thanks a lot, Bill! Glad you enjoyed the rhythm.

sara Etgen-Baker August 23, 2025 at 5:11 PM excellent footles! fabulous contest entry, have a pleasant evening, Sara Rowena Velasco August 25, 2025 at 2:17 AM Thank you so much, Sara! I truly appreciate your kind words. Wishing you a beautiful and peaceful evening as well .

I Am Anaya August 23, 2025 at 1:45 PM Beautiful footles Rowena my favorite is "chords leap dreams seep" August blessings Rowena Velasco August 25, 2025 at 2:15 AM Thank you so much for your kind words Wishing you many August blessings as well.