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Curtal Sonnet
A curtal Sonnet has eleven lines with a rhyme scheme of abc  abc  dcb  dc
It has 10 syllables in lines 1 through 5  and 7 through 10, however 
it has only two (2) syllables in lines 6 and 11 and they rhyme with lines 3,6, and 8.

Choosing To Believe

The weight of old age increases with time, dragging spirits down a depressive hole. And taking pills, prescribed to ease your pain, the last years are anything but sublime. You question if believing in a soul, is vain. You squirrel away cash you'll never spend just in case hard times should show up again. But you pray you'll never need that bankroll, choosing to believe God’s will, in the end, will reign. (Curtal Sonnet) 6/27/2021
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Shaw Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 3:10 AM
A first for me to read a Curtal Sonnet, and then see it turned into such a powerful write, it just adds to the body of content, a well deserved POTD Emile . . . : )
Pinet Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Thanks, Indiana, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile,
Nicole Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 7:45 PM
"The weight of old age increases with time" Yes, it most certainly does. So many thoughts linger, as we get older. Like you, I choose to believe in God's Will. This is so beautiful and tender. Congratulations Emile, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Pinet Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Brandy, your words are like a ray of sunshine my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Emile, congratulations on your POTD honors. This is written with your superb perceptions of life and its seasons. So well crafted. Blessings my friend. Enjoy this honor.
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Emile, wonderful write and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY, enjoy the honor, peace and tranquility _Constance
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Very well written and said, Emile, I am there and feeling it. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Fenn Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Cool Poem! Congrats on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Thanks Jennifer, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Congrats on POTD Emile..
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:44 PM
Perfect Emile! so true! congrats on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:07 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:33 AM
It gets us all eventually Emile, we have to make the most of what time we have left. Congrats on your POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Rone Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:23 AM
I thought about these issues just yesterday. S finely crafted format with timely advice. Congrats - Ken
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Thanks Ken, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations on your Potd win. A wonderful write. I have seen more kids/family fight over money/stuff left behind. I just had family steal from me after a family death. It is crazy. Use it all up. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Paula, I wholeheartedly agree and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Harsh truth. Yet, even as body decays, spirit soars! Congrats on POTD, Emile
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Unseeking, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Merryman Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 7:28 AM
An insightful write, Emile! Congrats on your POTD honor! Blessings, Kim M
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:50 AM
You poem speaks of reality and wisdom. Many can relate to this. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour and your day friend.
Pinet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Rama, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Theraven Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Emile, Gravity seeks to claim. Your form chosen and wisdom imparted in God's will have a lasting effect. -Richard
Pinet Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Richard, it is always nice to hear from you, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:12 PM
Wonderful write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Pinet Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Hello Emile, yes this is so true for everyone. You never know when you will need the saved money. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Hello Emile, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
Pinet Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Darlene, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
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June 27, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Ah, Emile, so much truth in this poem. I, myself, keep hesitating to spend and enjoy myself (nearing 80) for fear I will need the money one day...uh, one day, when I live one day at a time??? So well-written, too. You are to be commended. This is POTD worthy!
Pinet Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Milt, your comments are like a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day my friend, Emile.
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