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Choosing Dignity

He is an oppressive Master of the House commanding all to follow his beat; that on a last desperate evening, I plead relief from his vile craving When a violent urge attempts to devour my honor : Through rotten laughter, my primal instinct Rises---fear to dignity—lunging extended stabs Upon his bestial chest until red of blood Taints night’s floor with liberty's pure scent Washing me a young overseas maid Far from home yet boldly affirming Life’s valuable birthright. *Inspired by the story of Sara Balabagan, a maid-servant who killed her employer to protect her dignity. A Debbie Guzzi Contest … 1/17/1017 You Say You Want A Revolution
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Kimathi Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Beautiful!!! Congrats Nette, for your placement with this awesome work!!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Kudos on this powerful message! Congrats on your win my friend!!
Guzzi Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:51 PM
women around the world should have revolted long ago, being the eternal victim is NOT our place...congrad's Light & Love
May Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 6:47 PM
The scent of liberty is powerful...Congrats on your win Nette..
Melugin Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 3:41 AM
Revenge has never been composed as what you have written here. My best to you! Chuck
Kapoor Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 10:29 AM
It's a powerful poetic tribute to the one who has inspired you to write this beautiful verse based on a real story. My good wishes dear friend Nette for your entry in the Debbie's contest. A 7+ for this lovely piece of writing. Love and best wishes always...
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:35 PM
- A terrible true story, Nette - fantastic written as always :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Conte Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 7:08 AM
A triumphant work showing bravery rather than helplessness in a crucial time when the victory of spirit surfaces. Excellent rendition of the story!
Gupta Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 6:08 AM
Very appropriate response to the contest theme ... A piece of stark reality powerfully done ...
Ball Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 3:55 AM
WoW! #1 Well done on both counts. From one to seven this gets a 10 in my book. God Bless, JB
Paras Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:55 AM
Definitely powerful with a liberated edge to it. Woman, you rule!Thank you for accepting my poem in your last contest.
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