Choose Wisely Right Or Wrong Take a Side

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to examine the truth we need to walk the narrow path of what is right

instruct the ignorant whom are blinded by envy were their pride will not let them go

until they suffer deeply with hate it all speaks for itself in the end

to those of us whom can properly see stop calling people evil for no good reason

because they support the truth not the lie honesty goes a long way to being right

The Trojan wars has begun 
when we whom do not agree 
in certain opinions branded as influencers 
this is a new age word created by hate 

Claiming certain individuals are from the dark ages 
speaking of justice being critically accurate 
clinically pinpointing the raw nerve exposed as bad roots
in what is condemned to be truthfully laid bare has rights 

Narrative has taken an awful twist towards bullying 
in the opposite direction within no man's land 
pushing evil agendas down a person's throat as caring 
academically impaired those claiming knowledge

When we witness this physical exchange 
reshaping everything logical in this world 
to speak within council 
replacing it with what I say  

For those outside the kingdom of God everything is in parables
giving us visions enabling us to hear correctly 
but not understand least they should turn and be forgiven

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2019 12:52:00 PM

- A good advice to humanity, Liam - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2019 8:28:00 AM

In the title of your poem are the words of wisdom, Liam..very elegantly said. I like your introductory note as as well..hate is such a destructive emotion. You always write what you believe in. Name-calling, and bullying will not win in the end. Will of the people does win.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/3/2019 8:17:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))A very powerful poem, filled of Faith Light n' Truth, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!I agree with you in all!Sadly, we're living in a very corrupted, dangerous evil times!God is Light!Perfectly expressed !Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Enjoyed it!We need to pray alot for all ppl, Liam.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Remember the Lord is always right there with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^