Chook Pond

flirt the butterfly with the flowers
bee in a bonnet I see a dragon fly
over the lilly pads luring the frog
as a damsel bug not in distress 
tells the reality of a pond.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 7:59 PM
hey this is quite cute!!
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Quite surreal imagery Catherine - love the play on words too:-) hugs Jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Very picturesque, well done.
Mark Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Beautiful surreal is this pen,..well done..
Labeau Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 11:20 AM
hehehe the sun is shining
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