Choirs

rich voices sing out

       from  chapels each Sunday;

       welsh valleys resonate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Pretty write, but you have one too many syllables in your third line. I count six there at the present moment.
Jackson Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 10:12 AM
Yes, I started to write the traditional 5,7,5, but decided that I wanted the word "resonate", so what the hell I left it in. Best wishes Linda
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