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Choices We Make...

The panderer's grandiose smitten scheme spectacular invention those calibrated scenes, gradation of movement in unhurried steps resistance ineffectual fallen to debt... Marvelously sculptured are unscrupulous ideas, lavishly displayed within bubbled galleria tempted to chance overwhelming desire, dissapating blazon our spiritual fire... Corruption and greed,is not our human nature, more appropriate are unjust errant ventures...

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Lucinda Bulger

Date: 8/19/2008 9:43:00 AM

wow! I agree!!!! I like the way you sumed it all up and brought it together at close..

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/6/2008 12:04:00 PM

As always your thought provoking poetry is a pleasure to read - God Bless Jay

Date: 8/6/2008 11:57:00 AM

The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in an interesting way. The title is fitting. Nice flow. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day. Blessings to you. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/6/2008 4:43:00 AM

Yup, so sad, but so true. But everyone has their place, each one a purpose, if only lunar purpose, none the less, it just "all is". Great poem, Jay - Love Kristin