Choices

.                                                          Satan
                                                       Pitiless, Evil
                                              Denying, Sinning, Hating
                                              Death, Hell, Heaven, Life
                                            Loving, Repenting, Believing
                                                   Goodness, Mercy
                                                           Christ

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/15/2010 11:11:00 AM

wow i loved it i have never read this type of poem before but i loved the way it sounded when i read it aloud, rolls right off my tongue and never were truer words spoken. loved it and hope for more.

James Fraser

Date: 10/26/2009 4:11:00 AM

Kool Diamante Robin, not an easy form to do >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/10/2009 6:47:00 PM

great message here, love it!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2009 8:23:00 AM

of course opposites attract my attention and of course Christ is our only choice..beauiful message..excellent -Charma

Brian Strand

Date: 10/10/2009 12:36:00 AM

On the same wave lenghth today Robin (seemt posting today)Thank you for your welcome comments Rgds Brian

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/9/2009 8:53:00 PM

a well written piece Robin, I love the strong contrast in this work!!!!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/9/2009 6:27:00 PM

great turn! Robin!... and thanks for your gracious comments!... jim

Brian Strand

Date: 10/8/2009 11:45:00 PM

Excellent and original ,thank for sharing your precious gifts with us here Robin and thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Date: 10/8/2009 7:07:00 PM

Yes, many travel this journey to faith. Thankfully God has patience with us frail humans. Nice use of this challenging form. Blessings to you for sharing it. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2009 6:15:00 PM

You've got the choices listed lady. It all comes down to the individual's choice. And the bible says the mind is enmity, so we must learn to control the mind. Thanks for your comments today, God bless, Sincerely, Love, Moses