Written, November 23, 2025 For The Premiere Contest, “Pause of Polarity Interchange” Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker
Line of Inquiry: “Betwixt two thoughts there is a gap No illusions therein entrap In the time-stretched pause, we then see Ego craving is a mousetrap.” Oh, what a web our choices form when looking to fulfill a norm. Do this, do that, which one's the trap? Which one to do, which one to scrap? Must soon decide, for time takes hold of inner cravings to be bold, for choice of self and not the whole; to benefit from the set goal. In choices made, we're not alone; since others deal with what we've sown.
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