Chocolate Pie

giving endless supply . . .
bright sun, blue sky
beauties for the eye 
bird and butterfly
fields of wild rye
in soft winds sigh
rabbits spry 
and foxes sly
preying hawk's wild cry
on eye and ear sweetly lie
all of nature's works comply

until I hear you sigh
our whole walk gone awry
feet covered in cow pie

Faye Lanham Gibson 
Copyright, October 9, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2014 9:30:00 AM
Stepped in a few of these a few times myself. Congratulations on your win Faye.
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:16:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats lol:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:53:00 PM
ewww, not what I expected *lol*. congrats.
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:58:00 AM
lol, good humor, Faye, in your experience of chocolate pie. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/10/2014 12:05:00 PM
I enjoyed the humor with this nice take on the theme of the contest, Faye
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:38:00 AM
I liked this Faye! Very cute! Good luck if you're entering contest! ;)love peace and light! xxxx D.
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:04:00 PM
hahaha, is it for the pie contest as well? GREAT thinking outside the box.
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:10:00 PM
lol love the humour here:-) hugs Jan xxxx
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