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When your heart's feeling less than whole, half-truths become hard to endure. And chocolate lies tempt your soul, bittersweet; they leave you unsure. As teardrops snuff passion's flame, fantasy is rebuked by truth. And fear begins assigning blame, implicating the sins of youth. Learning he had cheated on you, you struggled to understand why. And as your anxieties grew, you wanted to curl up and die. You let self-doubt council a heart broken and exposed to attack. And started questioning your part, wishing you could turn the clock back. Your heart was cut, as with a knife, leaving you in anguish and pain. And it's left a hole in your life that threatens to drive you insane. (Quatrain) 8/17/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 10:35:00 AM
Clever use of bittersweet in the same sentence as "chocolate lies". Very raw phrase "as your anxieties grew you wanted to curl up and die". Strong poem, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 8/27/2015 8:55:00 AM
Brilliant one, Emile! Love that first stanza -it really resonates with me personally....the temp of a chocolate lie...the bittersweetness of deceptive love's bite... it's all very alluring, yet heartbreaking, cruel almost.... and as you go along, the lines become more and more unbearable. I love effective poetry like this! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/27/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support and kind words. Emile.
Date: 8/20/2015 8:30:00 AM
emile, you never cease to amaze....such a stunning example of truth you gave....chocolate lies takes my mind so much further....mental abuse by emotions for women is greater than any other....
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Date: 8/20/2015 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Eric, I appreciate both your support and kind words. Emile.
Date: 8/18/2015 10:57:00 AM
a disturbing, sharp piece that brings sadness to the fore.. beautiful in its melancholic tone, emile.. huggs
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Date: 8/19/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Nette, as always I appreciate your support my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/18/2015 9:06:00 AM
Interesting title you chose for this one Emile, a bleeding heart is never easy to deal with. I enjoyed your take :) have an awesome Tuesday!
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Date: 8/19/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Wilma, I appreciate your support and kind words. Emile.
Date: 8/18/2015 8:02:00 AM
Oh wow...this was a great write, heartbreaking, oh we have all been there...hugs
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Date: 8/18/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, your comments and support are welcome. Emile.

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