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chocolate cloud loaded with earth's lakes, streams, water rain down on us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/18/2021 5:10:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku, Sara. Original in imagery + thought. Best wishes, Brian
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/19/2021 3:55:00 AM
Brian, We got the rain yesterday and last night. It did rain down on us. Now we need the outpouring of the Holy Spirit over the whole nation one more time. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Date: 11/20/2021 5:03:00 PM
what a feast for the eyes Sara!, delightful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2021 2:44:00 AM
Jan, Your presence at my page delights me. Thanks, Sara
Date: 11/18/2021 7:47:00 AM
LOL, Mum would be out there in the garden, mouth open wide!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/20/2021 5:03:00 PM
ha ha ha love it my friend x
Date: 11/17/2021 3:05:00 AM
Chocolate clouds! I am undone, wonderful thought...Delice
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Date: 11/16/2021 11:01:00 PM
Children would love such chocolate clouds. :)
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Date: 11/16/2021 7:36:00 PM
I've got a super-size straw ready, Sara, for that 'chocolate cloud!' Can't wait! :) gw
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2021 11:35:00 AM
Gershon, That would be a treat but I might not have enough self-control and get really sick. Thanks for the nice review. Sara
Date: 11/16/2021 10:49:00 AM
Hello Sara Kendrick, oh such a lovely poem. I like the scene youpainted with your words. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2021 3:44:00 PM
Hello Sara, yes it has been a good day. Your welcome. enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2021 1:23:00 PM
Darlene, I am glad that you liked it. It has been a good day. Thank you, Sara