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Chocolate Cloud

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chocolate cloud loaded with earth's lakes, streams, water rain down on us

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/18/2021 5:10:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku, Sara. Original in imagery + thought. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/19/2021 3:55:00 AM

Brian, We got the rain yesterday and last night. It did rain down on us. Now we need the outpouring of the Holy Spirit over the whole nation one more time. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 11/20/2021 5:03:00 PM

what a feast for the eyes Sara!, delightful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2021 2:44:00 AM

Jan, Your presence at my page delights me. Thanks, Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2021 7:47:00 AM

LOL, Mum would be out there in the garden, mouth open wide!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2021 5:03:00 PM

ha ha ha love it my friend x

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/17/2021 3:05:00 AM

Chocolate clouds! I am undone, wonderful thought...Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/16/2021 11:01:00 PM

Children would love such chocolate clouds. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/16/2021 7:36:00 PM

I've got a super-size straw ready, Sara, for that 'chocolate cloud!' Can't wait! :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2021 11:35:00 AM

Gershon, That would be a treat but I might not have enough self-control and get really sick. Thanks for the nice review. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2021 10:49:00 AM

Hello Sara Kendrick, oh such a lovely poem. I like the scene youpainted with your words. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2021 3:44:00 PM

Hello Sara, yes it has been a good day. Your welcome. enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2021 1:23:00 PM

Darlene, I am glad that you liked it. It has been a good day. Thank you, Sara