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Chocolate Chip Cookies

Unicorns hiding under my big bed, waiting for chocolate chip cookies to be fed. Mom would not understand, unicorns and chocolate chip cookies would be banned. Date Written:8/14/2021 AABB YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/21/2021 9:35:00 PM

My unicorn ate mine! Sneaky guy, wouldn't confess! So cute and sweet. I liked this poem a lot :0)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/22/2021 10:21:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun chocolate chip cookies write. Don't you just hate it when your unicorn eats your cookies. Guess I need more cookies to share. Have a blessed autumn day..........................

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/20/2021 1:33:00 PM

Paula, I agree that your ditty is truly represented as Milt's idea of a 'Light Verse'. Yours is a balanced measure of wisdom and levity, here's hoping you the best my friend, Aloha!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2021 12:05:00 PM

Thanks for writing, for your kind words and best. Glad you like this fun chocolate chip cookies write. Have a blessed day.................................

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 8/17/2021 1:21:00 PM

Ha ha this is cute. I can imagine the child saying to mum, "The cookies are not for me, they're for the unicorn" with evidential crumbs at the corner of their lips... Lol this is fun

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, their lips will show the crumbs. But unicorns do live under the bed, right??? Have a blessed day.................................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/15/2021 7:05:00 AM

You made me laugh. Thanks. Well done!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2021 9:49:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun unicorn write. So glad I made you laugh. I love to make people laugh. Have a blessed day/week.................

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/15/2021 4:01:00 AM

Paula this is fun and very well done!! All the best in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2021 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your best. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day/week.................

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/15/2021 3:57:00 AM

Beautiful theme for the contest... I loved it...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you love this write. Have a blessed day/week.................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/14/2021 8:58:00 PM

Nice take for the contest Paula, my very best wishes for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2021 9:45:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week.................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/14/2021 5:22:00 PM

I might spare one chocolate chip cookie for a unicorn..Love your light-hearted verse...Delice Good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2021 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day/week.................

Marikate Kingston

Date: 8/14/2021 5:03:00 PM

Now I want a chocolate chip cookie! Are you sure unicorns eat cookies? I heard they love, magic, pink, candy soup . I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! COULDN'T BE CUTER

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2021 9:37:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun unicorn write. Oh yes, the unicorns under my bed love eating cookies cookies. They only eat, "magic, pink, candy soup" once a week. Have a blessed day/week.................