Caren Krutsinger Poet Personification

Chocolate Candy

They brought me home in a plastic bag
The whiteness of it nearly made me gag.
I was optimistic when they took me out.
But then a woman began to shout.

Why would you bring me this kind of junk?
I got re-bagged and thrown in a trunk.
Trunk got hot and I melted so badly.
This is no way to treat milk chocolate candy!

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Marikate Kingston July 30, 2021 at 8:48 PM Now I need a Hershey Bar! But not the one I found in my car! TEE HEE Caren Krutsinger July 30, 2021 at 9:28 PM You definitely would not want one from my trunk. A mouse has been living in there.

Gershon Wolf July 29, 2021 at 8:20 PM There ought to be a law. Write to Biden, pehaps. He'll suggest a union to take up your grievance. lol... Great write, my friend! ~ Laughter and Yuks, gw Caren Krutsinger July 30, 2021 at 11:57 AM Thank you; personification is one of my favorite types of poems to write.

Darlene De Beaulieu July 29, 2021 at 11:56 AM Hello Caren, I make chocolates. In the summer months it is a no-no. making chocolates this time of year is not a good idea. it would melt quickly. Hugs, Darlene De Beaulieu August 2, 2021 at 10:54 AM Hello Car4n, I will be eating chocolates more in the Fall. I make chocolates more towards Christmas. Hugs. Caren Krutsinger July 30, 2021 at 11:57 AM I love chocolate; too much!