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Chivalry

If I could travel back in time I would Return to the great age of chivalry To meet Sir Lancelot and Robin Hood In Merry Old England is where I'd be I would raise my sword for all that is good And kiss the hand of my fair lady To scale the castle wall with the moon above Just to spend a night in the arms of my love

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/23/2012 11:53:00 AM

Hello again Vince! A sweetly composed piece of love poetry, well rhymed with a pleasing flow. Well done, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2012 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Moment In Another Time" contest Vince. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2012 10:19:00 AM

congrats Vince on a wonderful write and win for one moment in another time for Nette luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2012 10:14:00 AM

Vince, congratulations with your win;-) Always~ PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2012 3:37:00 AM

gallantry and romance combined... i like this side of you vince; charming!... sweet congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/10/2012 1:36:00 AM

Congratulations Vince this is a beautiful poem hope you scale the wall one day xx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/9/2012 4:15:00 PM

That sounds like a place I would like to be if I went back and time! Love the cute poem. Always, Laura

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2012 11:26:00 AM

what can i say, vince... i'm choking!.. like this side of you!.:) huggs!

Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/31/2012 12:19:00 AM

What a great time you write of, when men lived for purpose and valor was its own reward. I like these thoughts - Chuck

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2012 9:23:00 AM

You got me smiling here, Vince! Ah, yes that is most definitely the perfect time to go back to, when chivalry was alive and kicking! I really enjoyed how you ended this, summed it perfectly :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2012 8:22:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..Yes, the stories told of when men were what they should be is always great to read and something for the men of today to look up to being able to carry out in their lives..Thanks for stopping by..I know that you have the characteristics of chilvary though..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 3/29/2012 2:08:00 AM

Lovely poem you've penned. Thanks for sharing, Vince. Have a great and wonderful day.

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/28/2012 9:03:00 PM

***sigh*** love this Vince, very dreamy piece