Been doing rewrites on this song for a few days. I think this version would be the most comfortable to sing in front of an audience. If I record it, I'll add it in here later. Still working on the chord progression part of the music, but have a melody; it will use a pentatonic blues scale in G (which is misleading because it takes the pentatonic minor scale and adds a sixth blue note, the diminished fifth). For those who know a little about music theory or play an instrument, the scale is G, B flat, C, D flat (the blue note), D, and F.