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Chinks In the Armour: a Collaboration

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Why do you tempt me with mischievous eyes Playful and naughty; do they tell or dare? Are you an angel, devil in disguise, Should I be trustful, or should I beware? Why do you tempt me with a winsome smile Not all-revealing, but denoting more. Chinks in my armour ... should I stay awhile? Fatal attraction which I can’t ignore. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh, stay awhile and find out what you will My eyes reveal the pleasures that await Take off that armour if you want this thrill You know your hunger only I can sate. So take a risk, and bare to me your all If angel or if demon, do you care? Into my searing arms you’re meant to fall Now take a step, move forward, if you dare! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian Collaboration © 11th December, 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 12/30/2017 2:02:00 AM

Just catching up with all your poems now Paul, and I can see that this was worth waiting for. Paul and Eileen what a great collaboration, so daring and sensual.You two write so well together,congratulations on this ....Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2017 3:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, Maria. Eileen will also be pleased with your reaction. I think I've read all your poems now, but will keep visiting them just in case one escaped the net:) ~ Warm regards & a happy new year // paul

John Michaels

Date: 12/16/2017 5:31:00 AM

Nice collaboration, Paul! Like the "If angel or if demon, do you care?" line, especially. Kind regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2017 3:41:00 AM

Hi John, thanking you once again since my previous reply seems to have disappeared into thin air!! Wishing you all the best for 2018. // paul

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/15/2017 11:16:00 PM

So take a risk and bare to me your all... I love it! Fantastic collaboration Paul and Eileen... hugs and smiles :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/16/2017 2:13:00 PM

Many thanks, Akkina...I love that you love:) Have a nice weekend. Hugs & smiles // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2017 12:25:00 AM

Hi Paul, a very enjoyable read. You both rocked this one. Well done.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/15/2017 7:49:00 AM

Thank you for the thumbs up, Richard. Sending you best seasonal greetings. // paul

Anand Parmale

Date: 12/14/2017 9:27:00 PM

Amazing Collaboration Paul and Eileen..I enjoyed the battle....

Paul Callus
Date: 12/15/2017 7:48:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed the 'engaging' words, Anand...thank you. Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 12/13/2017 10:13:00 AM

You two wrote an excellent collaboration here..

Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2017 3:59:00 PM

Pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration, S-1...thank you. Regards // paul

Tahira Parveen

Date: 12/13/2017 4:17:00 AM

Very well written... very daring though... gets to the point...lol:)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2017 3:58:00 PM

Thank you for your honest opinion, Tahira. You are always welcome to stop by. Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/13/2017 12:22:00 AM

Paul, writing with you comes so easily to me. It honestly didn't take very long to pen those lines. You know the themes I like, you know the style I like, you know how to get me writing when I'm not in the mood. :) 9th collab. Hey, how about we publish a book of our work! :) Hugs....

Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2017 3:55:00 PM

Let me take the liberty to echo your words, Eileen:) There are moments when we think and express ourselves alike, so that makes it easier to blend when co-writing. Once you start there is no stopping you! I suppose having met in person is also an added advantage. Hmmm we'll need many more poem to publish a book, but it's always possible:) Hugs // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/12/2017 4:19:00 PM

Paul, your collaboration with Eileen is so alluring, intimate, enticing and sensual. You had my attention at 'mischievous eyes' and I became more enthralled as I read. Your styles compliment each other's so beautifully and the writing flows so seamlessly. A fantastic write my friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2017 3:40:00 PM

Your comments are a pleasure to read, Susan. I hope Eileen stops by to read them, too. Thank you for the support and encouragement. ~ Warm regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/12/2017 7:41:00 AM

Ohhhhhh...How very sensual! I like it..... A lot! Great collaboration.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2017 9:01:00 AM

I love your reaction to this collaboration, Rhoda...Thank you! Have a lovely day. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/12/2017 7:22:00 AM

I commented on the other page and would like to comment on this one. Very well done to the both of you. Powerful :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2017 8:41:00 AM

Thank you a lot, Heidi. Pleased that you liked it, and I appreciate your stopping by to comment on both Eileen's and my posts. Regards // paul