Chinese Takeout With Love

Thank you for coming 
And giving me your time,
You seemed to like the Chinese,
I know I liked mine.

You have been gone now
For many a year,
Life was good and life was bad,  and
We’ve shed many a tear.

It’s late afternoon now, and I know you must,
Leave me alone again and you’ll be, too,
You take your doggie, I’ll keep mine,
We don’t live far, please come back, do.

If children just knew what a little visit means,
They would come often and not be shy,
But they like to be in their own carved out nests,
And as far as that goes, so do I.

So take the rest of the Chinese takeout,
And think of me when you chow down,
Remember it’s from Mom with love,
And don’t forget to come back around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/29/2018 6:46:00 PM
ah, a heart breaking poem. If only children knew how much we long for their company when they grow up and leave home. Often we end up carving our own nest and take comfort in those few friends we have. Thank you for sharing such a moving poem Bless your heart.
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Date: 5/28/2018 7:06:00 PM
I understand you a lot my friend, Sunlite . We that's life! Very well written!
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Date: 5/28/2018 5:58:00 PM
Sunlite, I feel this way with my boys,, even when they just leave 15 minutes away, but I was lucky today my youngest blessed me with a half hour of his and his girlfriends time :) .Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment on my poem “From Now On”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Hope you get a lot more visits.
Date: 5/28/2018 5:08:00 PM
awww, yes, I am sure this happens as we grow older. I am not THAT old yet and rarely does my daughter bring the kids over. On the other hand, rarely do I visit them either. We are all so busy with our own lives!!! We try to get together for special occasions.
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 5/27/2018 5:30:00 PM
Just leave the damned fortune cookies! I know the feeling well, Sunlite.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/30/2018 9:37:00 AM
You're funny! Those fortune cookies are so deep.
Date: 5/27/2018 11:24:00 AM
I got a huge lump in my throat especially at the 4th stanza. I miss my son and know he misses my home cooking - we rarely have take aways but we do love the local fish and chips. I think many parents especially mothers will be able to relate to your words.:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, and maybe one or two will be stirred to call.
Date: 5/27/2018 10:31:00 AM
Well expressed and written. I can feel it Sunlite :)
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/27/2018 10:16:00 AM
Kinda sad, many a parent will feel this way as their children grow and spend little time with them... You described it with poetic words, but I can feel the sadness...
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you...
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