Emma Buckeridge Poet Epulaeryu

Chinese Takeaway

Beef and black bean sauce with rice 
Hungry big wide eyes
Struggle to use chop sticks well
Its just fun to try
Satisfyingly 
I'm so full
Burp!



29th April 2011
Contest : 	Fast Food Epulaeryu
4th place win

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 7, 2011 at 6:57 AM Congratulations Emma on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud May 7, 2011 at 2:30 AM the last line blew me away, emma... greeaaat stuff with my best winning cheers! :) hugggs!

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2011 at 8:48 PM Congratulations, Emma. I sure liked this one.

Samual Ronthorpe May 6, 2011 at 3:15 PM Good job. Congrats.

Carolyn Devonshire May 6, 2011 at 2:36 PM Loved this the first time I read it, Emma, and am so glad to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne May 6, 2011 at 1:32 PM Many congrats on your win, Emma : )

Gautami Phookan May 6, 2011 at 12:46 PM Congrats Emma on your win in this contest. I don't take beef so for me chicken with rice does fine..Nice write chopsticks and all..Love, gautami

Kash Poet May 6, 2011 at 11:58 AM Lovely write.Congrats Emma on your win---kash

Gwendolen Song May 6, 2011 at 8:17 AM Hey Emma. Congrats on this fast food hit! I struggled to eat with chop sticks as I read it in Chinese. Lol. Everything about this poem is great and I hope many others enjoy it as much as I did. Blessings, Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song May 2, 2011 at 3:58 AM As amused as the one attempting to use her chopsticks, this is great stuff. Thanks for supporting my 2nd contest. .......BURP! ha ha. Hilarious. Blessings-We have so much to be thankful for this beautiful Monday. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2011 at 3:58 PM I adore chinese although not sure I had this kind of it before. Hope you do well in the contest, emma!

Carolyn Devonshire April 29, 2011 at 9:24 AM LOL It really is a challenge to try using chopsticks, Emma. Enjoyed this delightful epulaeryu. Best wishes in Gwendolen's contest! Love, Carolyn