Chinese Room

You spoke in languages I couldn’t know;
Everything you did, you did for show.
I’ll be glad when I can let you go,
With the dream I thought I would outgrow.

But 
       how 
              I 
 balked

When you peeled it off,
How everything held dear was dropped,

When I watched you half undress,
The physicality of your breath,
That I'd take away with one touch or less.

So don’t mind the scars
Or the open wounds;
I'm an artist in what I should not do.

And as in translation, I was lost in you.

A sociopath declared immune,
A machine within a Chinese room.

Don’t mind the shaky hands,
The bottle tops left loose,
The high hopes
Where I hung the noose.

C'est la vie --
At least for me.

Don’t mind the buggy eyes
When I ask to stay tonight,

The stammer
When I ask why we can’t be together.

Yeah, you love him,
It’s so 

Ordinary.

And you are so much better.

--
In reference to the Chinese Room thought experiment by John Searle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/13/2014 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jessica
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:14:00 AM
Well crafted piece, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations Jesse on your big win.
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:58:00 PM
many congrats on your win jessica:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 10/30/2014 7:26:00 PM
This is one of your best Jessica. I imagine you entered it in the contest.
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