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Chinese Room

You spoke in languages I couldn’t know; Everything you did, you did for show. I’ll be glad when I can let you go, With the dream I thought I would outgrow. But how I balked When you peeled it off, How everything held dear was dropped, When I watched you half undress, The physicality of your breath, That I'd take away with one touch or less. So don’t mind the scars Or the open wounds; I'm an artist in what I should not do. And as in translation, I was lost in you. A sociopath declared immune, A machine within a Chinese room. Don’t mind the shaky hands, The bottle tops left loose, The high hopes Where I hung the noose. C'est la vie -- At least for me. Don’t mind the buggy eyes When I ask to stay tonight, The stammer When I ask why we can’t be together. Yeah, you love him, It’s so Ordinary. And you are so much better. -- In reference to the Chinese Room thought experiment by John Searle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/13/2014 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jessica
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:14:00 AM
Well crafted piece, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations Jesse on your big win.
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:58:00 PM
many congrats on your win jessica:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 10/30/2014 7:26:00 PM
This is one of your best Jessica. I imagine you entered it in the contest.
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