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China White

Mickey mouse strung out China white Oh my Minnie! Zen Yin Yang Thirty days in the hole Tattooed dream Scattered and covered Ketchup and eggs Alley blues Toe rings and silver Gold to be pawned Living is just passing time ‘Time, time, time is on my side’

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 2/11/2014 7:43:00 AM

Come on toodles. Goodie two shoes used to be my nickname. Swear it.

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 2/11/2014 9:21:00 AM

Too funny.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 2/10/2014 7:56:00 AM

Dear Kilmer - Nice life. We all start out as infants. Some of us are lucky. Stark picture this is; it's good fortune to be looking at it and not in it.. love, Kathy

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 2/10/2014 7:50:00 PM

MOUSE. Mickey Mouse..... :) I can't stand that goodie two shoes crap.... ~Kilmer

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/23/2014 2:32:00 PM

Really interesting one. I like the line, "tattooed dream" .. nicely written. Always, Laura

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/17/2014 10:00:00 PM

I am your biggest fan, but saddened by the content. BG

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 1/18/2014 1:32:00 AM

Ah Barbara, that is disheartening. I apologize if I offended you in any way. ~Kilmer