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Entry for: A funny Summer Limerick Poetry Contest; Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

Chilly Jilly

This summer, it was Jilly’s dream
to eat a sweet, chilly ice cream
A seagull it took
Jilly said, “Oh, look!”
For Jilly’s too sweet to blaspheme!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Love this one!! Back with congrats
Miller Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Thank you Andrea
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/fun Limerick write. I hate having to share my ice cream with a seagull. Let them get their own. Have a fun day writing away...................
Miller Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Thank you Paula
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 9:15 AM
Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.
Miller Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 1:56 AM
Thank you Tania, also for the placement and for running this fun contest!
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:51 PM
An adorably cute limerick!
Miller Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 1:56 AM
Thank you Andrea
Callus Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Jilly has been well brought up, Terry!! Pity a sweet girl like her lost her ice-cream :( ~ Regards // paul
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Thank you Paul
Empress Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Hah good one, poor jilly, too sweet. We sometimes have seagulls sitting, sun bathing in our water rooms. I love the wordplay here and how youv rhymed too, creative limerick. Best wishes dear terry
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Thank you so much, I always appreciate your comments
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 6:58 AM
ha ha ha so funny and very topical as the gulls are such a pain on our little Island - they are like vultures the way they swoop down and steal food:-( hugs Jan xx
Miller Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Jan
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