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Entry for: A funny Summer Limerick Poetry Contest; Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

This summer, it was Jilly’s dream to eat a sweet, chilly ice cream A seagull it took Jilly said, “Oh, look!” For Jilly’s too sweet to blaspheme!

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Date: 8/19/2024 2:07:00 PM
Love this one!! Back with congrats
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 1:55:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 8/18/2024 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/fun Limerick write. I hate having to share my ice cream with a seagull. Let them get their own. Have a fun day writing away...................
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 1:55:00 AM
Thank you Paula
Date: 8/18/2024 9:15:00 AM
Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 1:56:00 AM
Thank you Tania, also for the placement and for running this fun contest!
Date: 8/17/2024 12:51:00 PM
An adorably cute limerick!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 1:56:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 8/16/2024 10:57:00 AM
Jilly has been well brought up, Terry!! Pity a sweet girl like her lost her ice-cream :( ~ Regards // paul
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/17/2024 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Paul
Date: 8/3/2024 10:57:00 AM
Hah good one, poor jilly, too sweet. We sometimes have seagulls sitting, sun bathing in our water rooms. I love the wordplay here and how youv rhymed too, creative limerick. Best wishes dear terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/17/2024 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, I always appreciate your comments
Date: 7/29/2024 6:58:00 AM
ha ha ha so funny and very topical as the gulls are such a pain on our little Island - they are like vultures the way they swoop down and steal food:-( hugs Jan xx
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/29/2024 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Jan

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