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Chilly Chandeliers - For Contest

Chilly Chandeliers 


Moth-like flakes danced around the streetlights
swaying in rhythm with the wind


11/11/2016

submitted to – SNOW – Poetry contest

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/16/2016 8:57:00 AM Very nice, John! Congrats! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/15/2016 5:32:00 PM such a wonderful picture in so few words John:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Anu Nayak Date: 11/15/2016 9:45:00 AM Wonderful imagery dear John:-)Congrats :-) love, Anu:) Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:21:00 PM Thank you Anu

Sandra Haight Date: 11/15/2016 9:03:00 AM A lovely vision in your Crystalline poem, John. Congrats on your podium win! Sandra Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:20:00 PM Thank you Sandra

Paul Callus Date: 11/15/2016 7:27:00 AM There is always some kind of activity going on around a streetlight, John! Yours makes a lovely picture. Congrats on your podium win. Regards // paul Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:20:00 PM often times the perception of the scene is the result of it being filtered through the heart of the onlooker. Thanks for stopping by to comment Paul.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2016 8:40:00 PM this creates such a beautiful picture. BIG congrats on the win. Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:19:00 PM Thanks Andrea...

Carrie Richards Date: 11/14/2016 8:20:00 PM I love this !! The title is so perfect too !! Beautiful, John !! Congratulations! Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:18:00 PM Thank you Carrie, always nice to hear from you.

Jan Allison Date: 11/11/2016 11:20:00 AM such wonderful imagery John:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:17:00 PM Thanks Jan, my very visual mind often collaborates with the muse and .....TA-DA....ZEE POEM....

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/11/2016 10:49:00 AM beautiful visuals so fluidly crafted, john..huggs Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:17:00 PM Nette, your comment reads like poetry....thank you.

Chris Green Date: 11/11/2016 10:31:00 AM Beautiful John. Moth-like snowflakes. I like that a lot. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 11/15/2016 12:16:00 PM Hey Chris thanks for checking in again, appreciate the support