Chilling

I'm stuck on this sidewalk alone
I can't contact god with no phone
Confusing religion
No carrier pigeon
Why doesn't god send down a drone?

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Lindsay Laurie

February 1, 2022 at 3:37 PM

Hello Rico ... You have to think that God is overworked every day with what goes on in his realm - thanks Rico - Lindsay

M. L. Kiser

January 30, 2022 at 4:46 PM

Oh my, what a predicament! A fun Limerick.

Terry Flood

January 30, 2022 at 4:03 PM

Voicemail! Every time, voicemail. Guess he’s busy right now, huh? Terry

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2022 at 10:07 PM

you don't have to have religion to have God. Faith is the phone.

Valsa George

January 29, 2022 at 8:10 PM

Those who are stuck in life, if they call God's name aloud, He would send not drones, but even supersonic ! :)

Janice Canerdy

January 29, 2022 at 7:38 PM

Phones are over-rated. Prayer's better.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 2:12 PM

Good one. God is there, He does hear and answer prayer. Sometimes the humans who are supposed to be doing God's work on earth are not doing His commands. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Ilene Bauer

January 29, 2022 at 12:53 PM

ha! yes, religion doesn't seem to keep up with the times, rico!

Rico Leffanta

January 29, 2022 at 8:17 PM

Our laws are based upon the concept of, "a reasonable man". I suspect a reasonable man would expect their god to be a few steps ahead of Santa, wouldn't you? Aloha!

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