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Chilling

Kone King ice cream
i’m chilling
shivering
licking my cone
standing
freezing
relishing
supporting
the opening
standing in snow
negative fifteen below

Kim Rodrigues © 3/3/2021

foodrhyme

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/5/2021 8:52:00 AM

Sounds awful to one line me, who thinks 70 is cold, Kim. That California living does that to me. A cold wind? I hide. I loved the rhyme nonetheless Pangie xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2021 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/3/2021 1:33:00 PM

Negative fifteen degrees and you are eating ice cream! What? Very interesting. Not something I could do in fifteen below zero!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:20:00 PM

Read this on a friend’s FB page this morning...brr...needed to be written.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/3/2021 9:27:00 AM

A dash of liqueur might revive you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:19:00 PM

LOL

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/3/2021 6:57:00 AM

Nice easy to read rhyme.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 7:01:00 AM

My kind of read too though sometimes I write longer ones. The inspiration for this was a friend whose Buffalo, NY area just opened an ice cream business in freezing weather, nevertheless Northerners don’t shy away from wild and crazy :) God bless!

Chilling

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