Chilled Perfection

I am consumed by the gentle trickle of liquid trail down my parched throat...
Chilled to perfection this pleasure of mine...
For it is a privilege to be in your very presence...

As my tongue wraps around the lingering drops...I am left breathless for more....affectionate and passionate you are to me...
oh my dear sweet Dr. pepper...I shall cherish you forever...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Yvonne Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:26 PM
I think I may be a tad older than you are. Dr. Pepper was first introduced to America in 1904 long before I was born. My guess is it has been my favorite for at least 35 years. Yes I am definetely way, way, way, way, way, older than you are!
Anderson Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Armand, yes well it does not matter how old you are to enjoy the rich delicious flavor of Dr. Pepper! Enjoy. Lol
Yvonne Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 3:30 PM
I love Dr. Pepper too. I think though that the man wasted seven years of his life becoming a Dr. I would of bought it even if it was called Mr. Pepper. I just don't think you need to be a Doctor to figure out your soda tastes great! Excellent write!
Anderson Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Lol, I know right! This pop has been my favorite pop for at least 17 years.
Vaso Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 12:14 AM
My favorite drink! Great poem, loved the ending!
Anderson Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 12:21 AM
Really? Its been my favorite forever...thanks.
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