Child's Treasure

child's treasure...
a tiny finger
in the navel fluff


© 2012 kashinath karmakar
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Placement: 1st;(Feb. 2012)

Contest:Fluff

Sponsor:Carol Brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Prabhu Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 10:09 AM
congrats .
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:23 PM
hahaha. I remember this cute poem, Kash. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:55 PM
congrats Kash on a marvelous first place win for this treasure luv..
Bunton Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 9:33 PM
This is so cute! I don't know how I missed it before. COngrats on your first place win. Blessings, Rhonda
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 3:41 PM
Kash, such an imaginative write, I love it. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe
Richards Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 1:32 PM
This one made me smile before, and smile again!! Congratulations to you, Kash! Love it more each time!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Creative work enjoyed reading ...Congrats on your win..I can just see that child..Way to go..Sara
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your super 1st place win in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 11:58 PM
actually, I just snuck down here with that poem I just posted. I have a few others I want to enter into contests, LIke one for Brian. Then I will get back upstairs. I am really sleepy. I could only do soup for about an hour earlier this evening. It's nice to catch you here at the same time. Maybe you have another new one coming up? I want to work on two other contests but I doubt I can keep my eyes open the rest of the night!!
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Well done. Congrats on your win in Carol's contest, Kash.
Brown Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Oh this is so funny and so sweet. congratuations Kash xx
Richards Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 8:12 PM
How a baby could find facination with so small a thing, is perhaps a lesson to the rest of us? Maybe it shouldn't take so many gadgets and gizmos to make us happy!! What a cute poem, Kash!! Clever write!
Taylor Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 4:57 PM
congrats Kash on a marvelous first place win for this awesome write on fluff luv..
Scholtz Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash, love Elizabeth
Williams Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Kash congrats on your win, love it..David
Onclaud Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 7:18 AM
come out, come out wherever you are.. i need my kashi vitamin today..:) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 11:35 AM
tickle, tickle, kashi buddy!... so nicely worded.. congrats on your win in my sijo contest.. this one is a winner too!.. come visit!..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:04 PM
oh, Kash, I had considered doing navel fluff too!! I'm glad I didn't now. YOURS is just GREAT here. I think this is exactly how to do haiku.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:55 PM
oh so cute..a grand visual Kash.. great projection luv.. good luck..
Dufresne Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 7:57 PM
oh I can see that! Mesmerizing treasure to them it is!
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