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child's treasure

child's treasure... a tiny finger in the navel fluff © 2012 kashinath karmakar =================== Placement: 1st;(Feb. 2012) Contest:Fluff Sponsor:Carol Brown

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Date: 2/19/2012 10:09:00 AM
congrats .
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:23:00 PM
hahaha. I remember this cute poem, Kash. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:55:00 PM
congrats Kash on a marvelous first place win for this treasure luv..
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Date: 2/16/2012 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:33:00 PM
This is so cute! I don't know how I missed it before. COngrats on your first place win. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:41:00 PM
Kash, such an imaginative write, I love it. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:32:00 PM
This one made me smile before, and smile again!! Congratulations to you, Kash! Love it more each time!!
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:31:00 PM
Creative work enjoyed reading ...Congrats on your win..I can just see that child..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2012 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your super 1st place win in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:58:00 PM
actually, I just snuck down here with that poem I just posted. I have a few others I want to enter into contests, LIke one for Brian. Then I will get back upstairs. I am really sleepy. I could only do soup for about an hour earlier this evening. It's nice to catch you here at the same time. Maybe you have another new one coming up? I want to work on two other contests but I doubt I can keep my eyes open the rest of the night!!
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:43:00 PM
Well done. Congrats on your win in Carol's contest, Kash.
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:30:00 AM
Oh this is so funny and so sweet. congratuations Kash xx
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Date: 2/9/2012 8:12:00 PM
How a baby could find facination with so small a thing, is perhaps a lesson to the rest of us? Maybe it shouldn't take so many gadgets and gizmos to make us happy!! What a cute poem, Kash!! Clever write!
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Date: 2/9/2012 5:37:00 PM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/9/2012 4:57:00 PM
congrats Kash on a marvelous first place win for this awesome write on fluff luv..
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Date: 2/9/2012 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/9/2012 3:26:00 PM
Kash congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 2/2/2012 7:18:00 AM
come out, come out wherever you are.. i need my kashi vitamin today..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:35:00 AM
tickle, tickle, kashi buddy!... so nicely worded.. congrats on your win in my sijo contest.. this one is a winner too!.. come visit!..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:04:00 PM
oh, Kash, I had considered doing navel fluff too!! I'm glad I didn't now. YOURS is just GREAT here. I think this is exactly how to do haiku.
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:55:00 PM
oh so cute..a grand visual Kash.. great projection luv.. good luck..
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:57:00 PM
oh I can see that! Mesmerizing treasure to them it is!
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