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Child's Play

I am like a little child Preparing for a duel I cushion, pad and quilt myself (Child’s play can be so cruel) I strap those puffy pillows on With Daddy’s biggest belt And soon the nudges of a blade Are barely even felt No sword can penetrate my heart So warm and snug within Its muffled beats are heavy With my un-repented sin I hold my breath and shut my eyes I swing my sword of wood I slice the air to ribbons But it doesn’t do much good The Lord will cut right through the fluff And pierce my thin façade His blade is double-edged and quick The living Word of God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/22/2009 8:11:00 AM
I feel many of these emotions as a result of my childhood. your writes are heart felt. again your rhymes are off the hook!!! :)
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:27:00 AM
I've found a new favourite poet! '...my unrepented sin,' '...his blade is double edged...' ...marvelous phrasing! LIKE a little child, yet an adult trying to dodge the ravages of sin with the innocence of a child. Superb my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/19/2008 9:41:00 AM
My day was boring but readiing your poems brightened it up!!! Elizabeth
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Date: 11/18/2008 10:55:00 AM
Your poem was so wonderfully written. The thought of being a child again is a soothing feeling from what we face in our adult lives. Life as an adult is hectic sometimes and it's nice to recall and reminisce the wonderful days of childhood. A child runs through life worry free and knows nothing about bills. I really enjoy reading your poetry, it captures my attention totally. I can’t wait to read more...Raul
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