Childs Moment

Tearing paper to see the prize
Seeing the glow in my child’s eyes



By: Greg Stanley
Christmas Miracle Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 10:12 PM
JUst Wonderful way to do this contest. short but very sweet.
Butterfly Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 8:44 AM
You captured Christmas morning perfectly in so few words. Beautiful.
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December 12, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Added you as a fav poet. Hope that is okay with you?
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December 11, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Short and very descriptively sweet.
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