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Children playing in the park, Laughing, swinging, running 'round, Their rambunctious antics leave their mark, On adults that relish their joyful sound. Laughing, swinging, running 'round, The children have no fears or cares. By responsibilities they are not bound, And they are covered by angels' prayers. The children have no fears or cares, Their only job right now to play, On their own, in groups or pairs, Enjoying this fun-filled summer's day. Their only job right now to play, Their rambunctious antics leave their mark. Enjoying this fun-filled summer's day, Children playing in the park. 6/29/21 Brian Strand's (July 16)

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Date: 7/16/2021 10:46:00 PM
It's a very beautiful Pnatoum Rhyme, So fluent; so flawless. Expresses child-psychology. Congatulations!
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Date: 7/4/2021 5:41:00 PM
We need more play... we have forgotten how to laugh. Prayers for your day. This was a wonderful write. Ann
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/6/2021 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 7/4/2021 12:18:00 PM
Great pantoum! Pangie xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/6/2021 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie!
Date: 7/2/2021 8:00:00 AM
Your works have great splendor. This is one too.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj! Your comments are always so encouraging!
Date: 7/2/2021 7:06:00 AM
Lovely write! I am carefreely playing once again in this old mind. I think God wants this for all of his children -- at all ages -- we just forget.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! I agree!
Date: 6/30/2021 7:52:00 PM
A well expressed poem about the freedom and joy of living that helps children be children... Thank you, Kim for the uplifting verse.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Shirley!
Date: 6/30/2021 2:06:00 PM
Lovely Kim. I can see them laughing and playing, chasing each other, floating boats in the pond, flying kites. Such fun. Well done with great imagery. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 6/30/2021 10:44:00 AM
Wonderful imagery. I love watching children play. Felt I was in a park. You took me on a wonderful journey. Thanks
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 7:44:00 PM
Thank you, Rama!
Date: 6/29/2021 7:18:00 PM
Lovely picture you paint here, Kim. I enjoyed the atmosphere created of your poem very much.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/2/2021 7:44:00 PM
Thank you, Milton! I appreciate your comments.