Children Play

Children Play Shape magic fantasies collectively imaginary friends live, too…pretend. Children, laugh their play on a summer day steamboats travel making waves dolls grant love! © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 16, 2010 Poetic form: Double Tetractys

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2010 6:23:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Dane Ann. Always a pleasure to read. Hope you are mending more as each day comes. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/16/2010 9:49:00 AM

You bring childhood to life with this! Nicely done, Dane Ann! ~ love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2010 7:26:00 AM

Guess many children live in fantasies and it may be due in part to the harsh circumstances they find at home and in the world around them. I had two fantasy horses as playmates when I was a child. They could fly and carried me to distant worlds where my imagination was fed. This is one of your best, my dear! Love, Carolyn