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[Note: This was inspired by a heart-wrenching film I saw on Yu Tube about two children in Africa see here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3v7ZQUzr0yo ] In deepest Africa, the missioner, Stumbled on a village plight.Two children, Wretched lying on the dirt, lonelier, Pathetic, starving in plain sight ; broken. They seemed like doll’s, discarded on the ground, With withered limbs instead of proper legs, “They’ve Polio as well”, the word’s around. Two children cast aside like they were dregs. Out from the bush the children’s sister came, With water in a basin and some soap. She had no food to give them , global shame, But washing their frail bodies gave some hope. Their little sister was no more than eight, She did what she could do and she was Great!

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Date: 3/27/2010 8:59:00 PM
Wow, what a detailed story to tell with such few words, very nice!!
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:46:00 PM
David, These kind of images burn into the brain and leave a hole in the heart knowing that we can't care for all of them and they must suffer. All countries need to unite so that helpless little children like this can get the help they need. You have written this poem with the insight and compassion of a true humanitarian. Love, Connie
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:00:00 AM
Yes, this is a very sad scene. It reminds me of other scenes i saw of people discarded like garbage. This is the world we live in. LIke you said, a global SHAME. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:55:00 AM
What a sad scene you paint, David. There are so many suffering children in Africa and throughout the world. Thank goodness these two had their sister! Brilliantly written, moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:51:00 AM
My heart bleeds for these children.
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