Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Tanka

Childhood Envy

Childhood Envy





Rain bath in open,
Envy those in childhood days,
Skating on wet floor,
Without any clothes put on,
Why have we so much so grown ?






Written December 17th, 2014
For Verlena's contest "The green eyed monster"

Awarded 4th place

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Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2015 at 9:00 AM Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Upmaji

Kayod5 Kayode January 3, 2015 at 2:03 AM Congrats on your fine win Upma... huggs

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2015 at 11:30 PM DR UPMA, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA

Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 3:08 PM Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma-) Hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker January 2, 2015 at 2:51 PM As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2014 at 10:18 PM ahhh, this is a very unique envy to write of. Clever of you to think of it!!

Frederic Parker December 17, 2014 at 4:49 PM I realized I had found paradise the day I looked at the world through the eyes of a child, though I was grown...good luck in the contest

Jan Allison December 17, 2014 at 7:36 AM Great question Dr Sharma - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans December 17, 2014 at 7:36 AM Life was so simple when we were children.

Eileen Manassian December 17, 2014 at 4:59 AM :) Sweet, Dr Upma....:) Why, indeed! Hugs to you! Please check your soupmail.