Child Within Me

Most people although aged
are very much young at heart
They love to dance and play 
They get excited in small things 

How many old and middle aged would love to behave like young?
Full of joy and enthusiasm 
Well... Most of them

That day during a cricket match
I made a bet with son
As my team hit sixes and fours
I clapped and jumped in joy
I even danced an awkward dance
My son said Mom you don't behave like fifty
I said I don't care, I want to enjoy
We all laughed, we had lot of fun

I do whatever my mind says
Sometimes child like and silly
I am young at heart
Such acts keep me always happy

I often wonder why should one behave as grownup 
when still a child at heart

Why can't we be our true self
Instead of following stereotyped world

It is so much fun to be a child
Just be and see

I got these words from dictionary:
Enthusiasm, Awkward, Stereotyped, Self, Child

Date: 10/14/2020

Winner 1st position
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/29/2020 1:57:00 PM
Just be and see...love it Rama. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/30/2020 7:35:00 AM
Yes just do it and see. It gives immense joy and happiness. Thanks. Enjoy your day friend. Regards Rama
Date: 10/28/2020 8:16:00 AM
My uncle always said that you are only young once, but you can be immature forever. Great poem and congrats on your win!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/29/2020 3:14:00 AM
Thanks friend. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care Rama
Date: 10/27/2020 9:56:00 PM
Always young at heart - playful, curious and just plain fun, Rama! Congratulations on your first place win. This was fun!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/27/2020 10:20:00 PM
Sam just do what I did once, it is so much fun and happiness giving, unforgettable memories for lifetime. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
Date: 10/27/2020 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on your top win and a beautiful poem!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/27/2020 11:43:00 AM
Thanks.Read yours, that's the reality of present generation. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
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