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A Line Gauthier Contest: Bite Size no96.. Written 28 Dec 24
Isabel, you’re always near Footloose on bare grass, winking-- That giggle lays by the pillow As nights linger with scent of milk ; Dear child ...gone, tucked by stars Yet Isabel you’re always near!

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Date: 1/8/2025 1:50:00 AM
Heartbreaking and aching with beauty. J
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Date: 1/6/2025 4:22:00 PM
Nette, you're kindness is bringing tears to my eyes. There is great sadness in loss of this kind. The poem doesn't specifically say what happened, but regardless of the reason, the sadness will persist. Take care and thanks!
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Date: 12/31/2024 3:22:00 PM
How touching, Dear Nette! In a few lines you have expressed so much depth! Dear Poetess, I could feel the pain, but this line is stunning - "Yet Isabel you’re always near!"
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Date: 12/31/2024 1:19:00 AM
Truly moving and so well penned, congratulations
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Date: 12/30/2024 7:15:00 PM
This poem does not leave readers unmoved ~ hugs xx
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Date: 12/29/2024 7:06:00 AM
Mournful and sweet. This is very moving Nette. Hugs Rick
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:42:00 PM
A fav for me! Just beautifully written....
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Date: 12/28/2024 12:11:00 PM
I can't even begin to fathom the anguish and loss; I'm cradled by the stars, but they'll never leave. Reminiscent poetry. This is extremely moving and genuine, Nette,
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Date: 12/28/2024 10:55:00 AM
This is so poignant and heartfelt dear Nette, sigh i felt this! Tucked by stars but never gone sigh, cant even imagine the pain and grief..sigh. Well woven verse. Best wishes, sending you light always
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