Child Or Adult?

Angered by the system 
Imprisoned by fate
Filled with emotion
Outlined with hate

Every minute with him 
Is a moment filled with pain
A father causing hurt
A child labeled insane

Picking at every wound
Determined to make him bleed
Father giving orders
Son longing to be free

Father swings in anger
Son hits back in rage
Father walks away free
Now son is in a cage

He wants to do the right thing
And live by all the rules
The law forces him to stay
How could they be so cruel?

He is no longer a child
He’ll be tried as an adult
Not allowed to make a choice
Though he’s allowed to vote

His father will not let him leave
Or do the things he wants
Tied by the laws of man
Tortured by fathers taunts

His mother wants to help him
She hasn’t the means
Witnessing as an outsider
In this horrible scene

Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/23/2009 7:56:00 PM
What a sad state of affairs, Lolita. Unfortunately, this scene plays out too often. Excellent writing! Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2009 8:21:00 PM
Dear Lolita, I grew up in Foster Homes and as a child I saw this POEM many times I see SUE ALAN, and JAMES are a little upset about the content of this POETIC MASTERPIECE ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:51:00 PM
Horrible is right ... sad commentary on the parenting of some people i.e. "Its my way or the highway" attitude ... Great question here: exactly who is the child and who is the adult?! Sounds like the father is very spoiled and self-centered. Well, obviously you've pushed my buttons with this one Lena ... LOL ... great writing!!
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Date: 3/17/2009 11:38:00 AM
This little write tells the tale of many a boy and girl in this world today.Only about 2% ever makes it into the news.Its a sad world we live in , if this is allowed to go on .Thanks for shareing .
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