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Sleepy, Weepy, Sweetie, Cutie, Babe drools. It crawls, On floor, On four. Burbles, Gabbles, Wets bed, Cute bud! Guileless, Artless, Chuckles, Giggles, Grows up. Sits up. Child walks. Child runs. Climbs up. Falls down. Naughty, Haughty, Spoiled brat! Moppet! Mom’s joy! Dad’s toy! God’s gift World’s light! ________________ August.2.2022 ~ Placed Tenth~ Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/5/2022 4:55:00 PM

You continue to impress me with your ability to write in different forms so well' Your Footles are always succinct and fun to read. Hugs, Bill

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 9:15:00 PM

Bill, you are an unrivalled master in writing sonnets. I find it rather difficult ! Thanks for your appreciation, sweet friend ....

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/4/2022 10:03:00 AM

You are a master of this form dear friend. I love the last set most, "God's gift World's light". Congratulations. Straight to my favs' list. ^_^ JCB

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 9:13:00 PM

Thanks a lot Jez.... ! You were one of my sources of inspiration in writing footles ! Gld you have honored it as your FAVE.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2022 11:29:00 AM

Valsa, an absolutely delightful flow of pristine images. A perfect, all inclusive, picture of babyhood that brings back memories of my children! Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings on wings of joy!

Valsa George
Date: 8/4/2022 9:53:00 AM

Sam, so glad I could revive memories in you of your children's early years . Thanks a lot for your beautiful and analytical comment. It is a pleasure reading your comments .....

Greg Gaul

Date: 8/3/2022 10:06:00 AM

Such a bouncey bit of fun. Clever too. Congrats on your fine placement.

Valsa George
Date: 8/4/2022 9:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot Greg for your kind visit to my page and also for your comment !

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/3/2022 6:17:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your well-deserved winning placement. Best regards dear friend Poetess.

Valsa George
Date: 8/4/2022 9:48:00 AM

Thank you dear Lasaad for your second visit to congratulate me !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/2/2022 8:23:00 PM

Throws up?! -- Thumbs up. Super-duper, Valsa. (I'd say these are Footsie-Wootsies.) LOL. Great! Thanks, gw

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:53:00 PM

Enjoyed your footles too.....! On seeing your comment, I feared if you were about to throw up seeing my footles ! With the 'thumps up'... I feel relieved! Thanks for your witty response, Gershon.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/2/2022 6:50:00 PM

Dearest Valsa, your endearing string of footles are filled with precious and adorable imagery. Each one brings a smile to my heart, my sweet friend. Your gifted pen shines! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:49:00 PM

When you say my pen is gifted, what should I say of yours.....! However I cherish this compliment from a great poetess. Thanks a lot dear Susan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2022 1:20:00 PM

Very cute, Valsa!

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:46:00 PM

They have to be cute to go with the cuties.... ! Thanks a lot Andrea !

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/2/2022 8:09:00 AM

Glad you are so well trained on these footles. Alas not my fav form. But that is not important. You did well. Best for a win.

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:45:00 PM

Can't say ! Sometimes some footles come to me by chance. That's all .Thanks a lot Victor !

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/2/2022 6:49:00 AM

An excellent sequence of footles, Valsa. As I read each phrase, a grin spread over my face. I wish you the best of success.

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:43:00 PM

So glad I could bring a grin to your lips ! Thanks to you, dear ever encouraging friend !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/2/2022 6:32:00 AM

You are an expert like Brian on this poetic form, Valsa. Well done my friend.

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:42:00 PM

A novice, never an expert ! After joining this site, everyday I am introduced to new forms, some of which I just try ! Thanks a lot Vijay for the compliment

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 8/2/2022 6:22:00 AM

Hello Valsa, I smiled as I read each line. Thank you for sharing this endearing poem. Cheers Anne :-)

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:39:00 PM

Thanks a lot Anne. I feel so happy for your kind visit and sweet comment !

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2022 4:40:00 AM

Great string of footles Valsa, best of luck. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 8/2/2022 10:38:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Tom. Glad you liked them ....