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Child Abuse

so beautiful on the outside so broken on the inside hide it all china doll 21 Syllables Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kevin Shaw 3/18/19

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/24/2019 7:59:00 AM

Bravo. So happy to see this deserving poem up near the top, Timothy. Congrats.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/24/2019 5:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Line!

Frankii Fame

Date: 3/19/2019 12:58:00 AM

well written expression, yet I feel a story only beginning to be written... simple, and yet so intense when it stirs up imagery of stories told. great poem

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/19/2019 3:24:00 PM

thank you Frankii!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/18/2019 8:28:00 PM

What a lovely poem, Timothy. A FAVE for me.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/18/2019 8:37:00 PM

<3 Thank you Miss Line