Child

Love of his life he wed because
although no longer young, she was
quite childlike.

Not able to conceive, she cried!
Once pregnant though, she nearly died
from childbirth!

But well-prepared were they to bring
their new son home, where everything
was childproof.

She spoiled their son; she’d always stay
at home for him; no need had they
for childcare.

Their son’s now grown. There’s too much of
an empty space. Now his dear love
feels childfree.

May 13, 2020 for Joseph May's Compounding the Verse Poetry Contest
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your third place win Andrea! Your entry moved me because of my love for children. I didn’t get one written for this contest but wanted to. This form of Margaret’s is a challenge but worthwhile certainly! xxoo
May Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea, Congrats on your win
Mishra Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:29 PM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win Andrea :)
Watt Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Back to say how glad I am that you won with this charming write ~ contragulations! wait, confragulations, no, constrangulations, oh never mind. Well done!
Makama Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 6:03 AM
That is the beauty of life. It is a cycle! The one you cared for to the point you care not of yourself, grows up and leaves a void in you. I truly love this well expressed poem.
Michael Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 11:07 AM
After all that love and care...I hope she can sit back and enjoy life...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 10:52 PM
Love it!
Godwin Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:35 PM
I need to read about the contest. Your write intrigued me to learn more so I can fully understand (or maybe I'm just too numb for poetry right now.) I can tell from others below that you conquered a challenging write - now, that I believe because my friend is a word conqueror! I'm off to read about the contest. Love, CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 2:05 PM
andie, i have a soft spot for children and this heartwarming write speaks to me...you fill mr up!... huggs and a soupie from me...
Watt Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Andrea, an awesome write in this challenging form. You have woven a wistful, circle-of-life tale around the word 'child' in a masterful way. This should do really well in the contest, I'm sure ~ John
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:21 AM
There are so many feeling in this short piece. I like how you transition through each phase of their lives.
Yamin Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 4:21 AM
Dear Andrea, Awesome poem. Very impressive. Good luck in the contest. - Mohammad
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 4:02 AM
Well written Andrea, good luck Tom
Somadas Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 3:43 AM
Good one Andrea..Good luck in the contest..
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 2:47 AM
You did really well with Margaret's lovely form Andrea. I am trying to think of something I can write for this contest. I am sure your poem will do well! xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 5:20 PM
a VERY hard form to do, Connie. I aleady used up moon in another one in this form!! Moon, sun, snow and rain. I may have done all those, and there is not much else to do it really well with!
Mishra Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:57 AM
Such an emotional storytelling with this form Andrea. I could feel them swaying from pain to happiness then emptiness. Wonderful creation. All the best! :)
Milgate Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 7:32 PM
I don't know dogs are easier!! Interesting type of poetry and poem. Clever use of child I do Remember about your treatments being so difficult. I would not do it again, but was told that I would not make it past next couple of months. Hard decisions to make in life. Hope all is well with you during these strange times. Interesting to see how people react. Take care. Interesting type of poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 5:22 PM
thanks, Linda. I find this form odd, but I did my best. Strange times indeed and the stuff I am hearing, it's VERY weird!! Let's hope you and I continue with success in our cancerf survivor mode!
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