Chicks

Baby chicks soft down
Mother clucks sends the alarm
Run gather quick safe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 7:24 AM
smile....your verse was about your love for God but written in a way that any person who believes in God could appreciate it, that's what made it standout!
Fraser Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Ducks are so lovely Sara, and ducklings are a joy to watch following their mum around, so comical at time >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 5:03 AM
We have lots of ducks in my area and they react the same way as Mother Chick in your poem.. they are so adorable these little ones... be them human or animal... thankxxx for a start to my day that is fine... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace