Chicks

Baby chicks soft down Mother clucks sends the alarm Run gather quick safe

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/18/2010 7:24:00 AM

smile....your verse was about your love for God but written in a way that any person who believes in God could appreciate it, that's what made it standout!

James Fraser

Date: 11/27/2009 9:56:00 AM

Ducks are so lovely Sara, and ducklings are a joy to watch following their mum around, so comical at time >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2009 5:03:00 AM

We have lots of ducks in my area and they react the same way as Mother Chick in your poem.. they are so adorable these little ones... be them human or animal... thankxxx for a start to my day that is fine... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"