Chicken, Who?....Me?

The cracker crisp Maine air 
rang with the rooster’s revel.
Moving day, time to clean the hens shed.
Monstrous three story hatchery,
thousands of burnt umber; beauties a laying.

Lace edged, bobby socks, red Keds, 
barrettes, T-shirt and shorts;
and off to the hen house, pony tail bouncing.
Immersed in the acrid reek of chicken dew;
Blue jean boys, Georgie, and Wayne,
Aunt Donna and pony-tail girl;
wade through squawk, cluck and doodle.

Horrific chore, it had to get rid of THE girl? 
The boys gawk at her waiting.
Up they all must go! Sunny side up!
Up, up, with the upside down 
omelet laying peckers.

Grande dames lance laces,
buttons and barrettes.
wing flap, feathers fly,
deep brown questioning eyes.

“Get along with you three!”
Aunt Donna screams, 
spitting feathers above the din.
 “Up stairs with the whole damn lot of them!”

The boys eye the girl 
and with a tilt of her chin 
and scrawny pecker in each diminutive hand;
she joins the troops
walking gingerly over 
the sawdust refuse strewn floor, 
up the tangled trio go, up!

And into the valley of peckers
strode she.......grin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 6:17 AM
Hi My Poet Friend, after the judging was complete for my contest, I decided to search for your poem (to see who wrote it) so I could tell you personally that I really appreciated you for supporting my contest. I feel sad when I have to leave poems out...and really sad when it was someone whose work I enjoy reading. Thank you for entering and giving a tribute to my rooster and I thank you for your words. (And friendship...of course. This is the hardest part.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
Johnson Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 2:11 PM
This was written by someone who knows her chickens and their care. My bantys pretty much did for themselves. Thanks for reading and good luck in the contest with this dandy. Love, Joyce
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 12:54 PM
What an entertaining poem dearest friend:)and I looove the title..lol..Charma
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Interesting write by one who knows about chicken flesh and eggs....Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Chachere Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 5:18 PM
She is an awesome girl! i really enjoyed this write.(: -Always&Forever Lynette
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Deb, it's the other chicken poem of mine entered in the contest. I think most people think chicken little is too "dark" haha. yeah, poor baby, what I did to him! LUv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Deb, I really like the sound of this one. soup mail.
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Sounds like you have gathered a few eggs .... me too, as a kid, this was my chore, trying not to get pecked to death!! Pigtails and all!! :) Great poem...loved this gem!!
Nutter Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 6:28 PM
This piece really made me smile, then grin, then laugh. "omelet laying peckers" such a creative piece.
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Wish you all the best
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Good job for the new contest..good luck..oh..yes.. fixed...how do u come up with these lines girl? luv.. Linda-Marie..
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