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Chicken, Who?....Me?

The cracker crisp Maine air rang with the rooster’s revel. Moving day, time to clean the hens shed. Monstrous three story hatchery, thousands of burnt umber; beauties a laying. Lace edged, bobby socks, red Keds, barrettes, T-shirt and shorts; and off to the hen house, pony tail bouncing. Immersed in the acrid reek of chicken dew; Blue jean boys, Georgie, and Wayne, Aunt Donna and pony-tail girl; wade through squawk, cluck and doodle. Horrific chore, it had to get rid of THE girl? The boys gawk at her waiting. Up they all must go! Sunny side up! Up, up, with the upside down omelet laying peckers. Grande dames lance laces, buttons and barrettes. wing flap, feathers fly, deep brown questioning eyes. “Get along with you three!” Aunt Donna screams, spitting feathers above the din. “Up stairs with the whole damn lot of them!” The boys eye the girl and with a tilt of her chin and scrawny pecker in each diminutive hand; she joins the troops walking gingerly over the sawdust refuse strewn floor, up the tangled trio go, up! And into the valley of peckers strode she.......grin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 6:17:00 AM
Hi My Poet Friend, after the judging was complete for my contest, I decided to search for your poem (to see who wrote it) so I could tell you personally that I really appreciated you for supporting my contest. I feel sad when I have to leave poems out...and really sad when it was someone whose work I enjoy reading. Thank you for entering and giving a tribute to my rooster and I thank you for your words. (And friendship...of course. This is the hardest part.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/6/2010 2:11:00 PM
This was written by someone who knows her chickens and their care. My bantys pretty much did for themselves. Thanks for reading and good luck in the contest with this dandy. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/6/2010 12:54:00 PM
What an entertaining poem dearest friend:)and I looove the title..lol..Charma
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Date: 3/5/2010 6:22:00 AM
Interesting write by one who knows about chicken flesh and eggs....Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:18:00 PM
She is an awesome girl! i really enjoyed this write.(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/3/2010 2:32:00 PM
Deb, it's the other chicken poem of mine entered in the contest. I think most people think chicken little is too "dark" haha. yeah, poor baby, what I did to him! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:00:00 PM
Deb, I really like the sound of this one. soup mail.
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Date: 3/2/2010 7:40:00 PM
Sounds like you have gathered a few eggs .... me too, as a kid, this was my chore, trying not to get pecked to death!! Pigtails and all!! :) Great poem...loved this gem!!
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:28:00 PM
This piece really made me smile, then grin, then laugh. "omelet laying peckers" such a creative piece.
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:22:00 PM
Wish you all the best
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:12:00 PM
Good job for the new contest..good luck..oh..yes.. fixed...how do u come up with these lines girl? luv.. Linda-Marie..
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