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Chicken Coop Breeze

country road
honeysuckle smell floating
on chicken coop breeze

naturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

August 19, 2012 at 11:35 AM

I love idea of the conflicting smells here. CUTE.

Russell Sivey

August 19, 2012 at 11:27 AM

What an interesting write Charles! I am amazed at its simplicity and power behind the voice! Great Work!!

Anne Rutherford

August 19, 2012 at 6:47 AM

So well said Charles, Great Haiku. Anne

James Marshall Goff

August 19, 2012 at 5:57 AM

I really like this, Charles...reminds me of the "in the moment" haiku of my favorit haikuist...Masaoka Shiki...to answer your ? re: the word "agash" is a game still played today by the Pashtun peope of Pakistan....whose beliefs hold sacred, magical powers associated with martyrs and other Deities....unsundering is a battle played out in the 24th. century by warriors of this belief...hope this helps! Now on to more of your cool haiku! Jimbo

Cyndi Macmillan

August 19, 2012 at 5:47 AM

I like this! And I may have walked this road. Though we live in a city, we are only 5 mins away from farmland and we frequently go for drives, stopping off at farm stands for produce... Enjoyed this, Cyndi