Chicken Coop Breeze

country road honeysuckle smell floating on chicken coop breeze

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2012 11:35:00 AM

I love idea of the conflicting smells here. CUTE.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/19/2012 11:27:00 AM

What an interesting write Charles! I am amazed at its simplicity and power behind the voice! Great Work!!

Anne Rutherford

Date: 8/19/2012 6:47:00 AM

So well said Charles, Great Haiku. Anne

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/19/2012 5:57:00 AM

I really like this, Charles...reminds me of the "in the moment" haiku of my favorit haikuist...Masaoka Shiki...to answer your ? re: the word "agash" is a game still played today by the Pashtun peope of Pakistan....whose beliefs hold sacred, magical powers associated with martyrs and other Deities....unsundering is a battle played out in the 24th. century by warriors of this belief...hope this helps! Now on to more of your cool haiku! Jimbo

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/19/2012 5:47:00 AM

I like this! And I may have walked this road. Though we live in a city, we are only 5 mins away from farmland and we frequently go for drives, stopping off at farm stands for produce... Enjoyed this, Cyndi

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 2:15:00 AM

Chas, excellent...David

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/18/2012 10:45:00 PM

Honeysuckles smell much better than chicken excrement. Good haiku as always, Charles.