Carol Fillmore Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Chickadee Symphony

Tiny winged creatures
flit from tree to tree
perch on tree branches
preening breast feathers
wee plump bodies

Fee fee-fee fee
delicate songs
bird orchestra
they serenade

Feathered friends
entertain,
we listen

Fee fee
sweet song

Birds

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James Foulk April 12, 2011 at 8:37 PM this was a great piece of creative poetry. when ever i hear that name it reminds me of the W.C. Fields movie where he says oh my little Chicadee to this lady in the movie. your title is what drew to this poem and a very fine one it was.

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2011 at 7:55 PM I loved that Fee fee part. Sweet chicadees! This form suits the topic wonderfully.

Sara Kendrick March 9, 2011 at 3:44 PM Great Diminished Hexaverse...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your kind remarks on my work..Sara

Barbara Gorelick March 7, 2011 at 6:59 PM Adorable! I love it..well done. BG