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Chickadee

who dares chirp at me?
chick-a-dee-dee-dee-dee-dee …
it’s my maple tree!


Written 1/17/2021 for
A Cardinal, Blue Jay, Or Chickadee Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Eric Cohen | Year Posted 2021

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January 28, 2021 at 7:19 PM

Hey, Eric! Congrats on your win in the con-con-con-con-con-contest. lol. Nicely done. ~ Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2021 at 2:08 PM

oh I love this one with the rhyming. it's a little like how I did mine, knowing how it's cry is to warn others!! Congrats on the win

January 25, 2021 at 12:32 PM

Hi Andrea. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind comments on my first Haiku. I know they don't need to rhyme, but there is no law against and I sometimes can't help myself. I thought your "retweets" was very clever!

January 23, 2021 at 2:34 PM

If this was a winner, then I can see why. Good write!

January 23, 2021 at 7:43 PM

Appreciate the kind words, Robert. As mentioned, this one was a direct quote from chickadees in my yard.

January 23, 2021 at 1:10 PM

what a cheery poem Eric, many congrats:-) xx

January 23, 2021 at 1:14 PM

Thank you, Jan. Nice to hear from you. ~Eric

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 23, 2021 at 11:45 AM

- Congratulations on your winning haiku, Eric :) - // Anne-Lise :)

January 23, 2021 at 1:17 PM

Many thanks, Sunshine. This is my first Haiku. Best to you in the new year. ~Eric

Linda Alice Fowler

January 22, 2021 at 5:39 PM

Congratulations on the win Eric! Linda

January 22, 2021 at 6:09 PM

Thanks, Linda.

January 22, 2021 at 4:24 PM

Eric, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!

January 22, 2021 at 6:08 PM

Thanks, Tania. Appreciate your consideration and sponsorship of this contest.

January 18, 2021 at 5:15 PM

Very witty and just lain fun Eric! Best wishes for the contest!

January 18, 2021 at 9:26 PM

Thanks, Sam. Wishing you the best in the contest and the new year as well.

January 18, 2021 at 3:06 AM

What a fun and cheerful start to my morning! You brought a smile to a gloomy day here in the UK,Eric. I loved it!

January 18, 2021 at 1:45 PM

And you brought me a smile with your visit and kind words, Wendy. This is my first Haiku, and is a direct quote from inhabitants of my backyard.

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