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Chickadee

who dares chirp at me? chick-a-dee-dee-dee-dee-dee … it’s my maple tree! Written 1/17/2021 for A Cardinal, Blue Jay, Or Chickadee Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/28/2021 7:19:00 PM
Hey, Eric! Congrats on your win in the con-con-con-con-con-contest. lol. Nicely done. ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/24/2021 2:08:00 PM
oh I love this one with the rhyming. it's a little like how I did mine, knowing how it's cry is to warn others!! Congrats on the win
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/25/2021 12:32:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind comments on my first Haiku. I know they don't need to rhyme, but there is no law against and I sometimes can't help myself. I thought your "retweets" was very clever!
Date: 1/23/2021 2:34:00 PM
If this was a winner, then I can see why. Good write!
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/23/2021 7:43:00 PM
Appreciate the kind words, Robert. As mentioned, this one was a direct quote from chickadees in my yard.
Date: 1/23/2021 1:10:00 PM
what a cheery poem Eric, many congrats:-) xx
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/23/2021 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Nice to hear from you. ~Eric
Date: 1/23/2021 11:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning haiku, Eric :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/23/2021 1:17:00 PM
Many thanks, Sunshine. This is my first Haiku. Best to you in the new year. ~Eric
Date: 1/22/2021 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Eric! Linda
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/22/2021 6:09:00 PM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 1/22/2021 4:24:00 PM
Eric, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/22/2021 6:08:00 PM
Thanks, Tania. Appreciate your consideration and sponsorship of this contest.
Date: 1/18/2021 5:15:00 PM
Very witty and just lain fun Eric! Best wishes for the contest!
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/18/2021 9:26:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. Wishing you the best in the contest and the new year as well.
Date: 1/18/2021 3:06:00 AM
What a fun and cheerful start to my morning! You brought a smile to a gloomy day here in the UK,Eric. I loved it!
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/18/2021 1:45:00 PM
And you brought me a smile with your visit and kind words, Wendy. This is my first Haiku, and is a direct quote from inhabitants of my backyard.