Chick-a-dee Survival

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Poetry/Nonet/Chick-a-dee Survival
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1607-950-15
All Right Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 15, 2023
For the International Contest, Nonet
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 12/21/2023

First Place

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"I heard a bird singing in the morn' on a bitter cold winter day- it was so sweet and magical." Quote By _Constance Chick-a-dee was lost in the cold snow his nest had blown away in wind now, he was just wandering the winter season tough then he found a hole just big enough in a tree for a bird in he went and gathered some blades of grass beneath the white snow he even found some fur a lady left out some seeds he went back and forth to his nest now full with seeds he waited for Spring

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Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 1:12:00 PM

This was a very creative one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest

Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2023 4:53:00 AM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 12/21/2023 4:03:00 AM

Dear Constance, its amazing how you can paint imagery and do storytelling in such a flawless manner in the form of a nonet. I heard and saw through your words all that you’ve described in such a poetic manner. I also love the quote. And also how you’ve written “ he went back and forth to his nest now full with seeds he waited for Spring“ so touching too! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you beautiful holidays

Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2023 4:54:00 AM

Ink, thank you so much for the contest and my great placement, and for the lovely comment and congratulations, happy holidays !

Jay Narain

Date: 12/15/2023 10:32:00 AM

Nice Nonet.

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2023 4:17:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings